What Bobby did Right
As a public speaking coach, I think the harsh criticism of Govenror Bobby Jindal’s speech Tuesday night sets a bad precedent for speakers everywhere. Others will critique what he said; I offer an examination of how he said it. While I have always given praise to President Obama’s speaking style, Governor Jindal was not participating in a public speaking contest against the President. If we are always going to use President Obama as the standard by which all other speakers are judged, we might as well not even try to deliver a quality speech.
It is very easy to sit on the sidelines and criticize a speaker. Public speaking is challenging, yet Governor Jindal wasn’t even delivering a speech as much as he was giving a monologue into a camera. He had no audience to respond to him, no way of judging how the crowd was reacting to him, and no way to weave members of the crowd into the address to give it life as the president did several times during his own speech. Despite not having a live audience, or the pageantry of the Presidency behind him, Governor Jindal did five crucial things right during his speech.
First of all, he was passionate. It was very obvious that Jindal believed in what he was saying and the words he offered were sincere. Despite the criticism of his voice, it was not monotone as it appropriately emphasized key words and phrases. Second, his eye contact was spot on and many people felt he was speaking directly to them. Third, he served his audience by recognizing our concerns and empathizing with our needs. As an example, he used “we” many times throughout the speech which has the effect of bonding the speaker with the audience.
Fourth, Governor Jindal did something that all speakers should pay attention to, study, and and learn from. He made it personal and became a storyteller. Several times throughout the speech he incorporated stories about his family, his personal journey, and his experience as Governor to make the speech three-dimensional. He didn’t just stand there and read a laundry list of problems. He based solutions on the stories he shared which translated into solid teachings about philosophy and politics. All speakers can learn from this important principle, which is to make it personal and become a storyteller.
Lastly, Governor Jindal did his best to have a conversation with the audience and not sound like a fire and brimstone public speaker. I would encourage anyone who has to give a speech to remember that the most important thing you can do as a speaker is be yourself. Stop trying to sound like Barack Obama or anyone else for that matter. Authenticity counts more than anything.
Richard Zeoli is the author of “The 7 Principles of Public Speaking: Proven Methods from a PR Professional.” He is founder and president of RZC Impact, an executive communications-training firm specializing in public speaking and media training for politicians, corporate executives, and entrepreneurs. His website is www.rzcimpact.com.












